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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 10:44 pm    Post subject: New Story

“Another day, another dolla,” I thought as I walked into work that night. I, by the way, am Alexandra Jones. I worked at Club Static as a waitress. The club was in downtown Atlanta and was always crowded. Tonight someone was having a big party for All-Star Weekend and supposedly everyone in the ATL was trying to come.

I went into the back and changed into my uniform. My best friend Tracy Williams walked in. “You’re late again,” she said laughing. “Traffic.” I simply said. “Whatever.” She said, “Tonight is going to be off da chain!” “I know.” I said smiling. “Hurry up and change Zan.” She said walking out the door.

I changed into my uniform as fast as I could. “God I hate this uniform,” I thought. It was a skintight midriff baring white shirt with “Static” printed across the chest, a black short skirt with splits on both sides, and white and black Forces. For some of the waitresses it was cool, but I hated it. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not like I looked bad in it, trust me I didn’t. But I hated showing so much skin. I am around 5’8, brown skinned, brown almost black eyes, long black hair, and a body most says rival Beyonce. Unfortunately I’m also the shy type. At 20, I had to take the job to help pay for college.

Anyway, I headed into the front to get my tray and start working. I got to the bar and saw my boss Brandon. He was 26 and a complete assh***. “Hey beautiful.” He said smiling at me. “Brandon,” I said rolling my eyes. He wasn’t ugly; he just wasn’t my type, something he couldn’t understand. He handed me my tray after looking me up and down. “You’ll be working in VIP. I need my finest up there tonight.” He said. “Fine,” I said beginning to walk away. I headed up to VIP having to push my way threw the growing crowd. VIP was the best and worst place to work. It meant huge stars and constant come-ons.


***Will post next part soon***
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lilboomer
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 10:50 pm    Post subject: New Story

I LIKE IT. KEEP IT COMIN!
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Dunya
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 1:33 am    Post subject: New Story

good job....Keep writing.
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AllensBabyGirl3
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 2:11 am    Post subject: New Story

DATS WAS GOOD, KEEP IT COMIN GIRL
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:08 am    Post subject: New Story

THAT WAS HOT! KEEP IT UP!!
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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:17 am    Post subject: New Story

Next part

I walked into VIP and instantly saw the big crowd. Michael Vick was throwing the party and a lot of sports and music stars were there. Michael Vick was talking to Ludacris and the Disturbing Tha Peace Family. I headed there to begin taking drink orders. As I went over I could see the other waitresses coming, one being Tracy. “Good,” I thought, “at least I’ll have someone to joke around with.”

“Do any of you want to make a drink order?” I said to Michael Vick and the DTP family. “Yeah, can we get two bottles of Cristal?” said Luda checking to make sure that was everyone wanted. “Sure.” I said smiling. I turned around and headed to the VIP bar to get their drinks. I returned and handed the bottles to Michael and Luda. As I turned to get more orders I saw Chingy smile at me. “He is sooooooo fine.” I thought as walked away.

By that time VIP was packed. Ballplayers kept coming in along with their friends. Kobe Bryant, Shaq, Kevin Garnett, Jason Kidd, and Tracy McGrady were already there. Bottles of Cristal and Hennessey were being ordered left and right. Along with that, guys couldn’t keep their hands to themselves. Just then, Allen Iverson (note: Allen is 24 in this story and only has one child Tiaura with Tawanna but they aren’t together anymore) and his crew walked in. They went to a table and I had to go take their drink orders.

“Welcome to Static. Do any of you want to make a drink order?” I asked. I had to admit Allen Iverson was looking sexy. He had on a black Sean John velour suit with black Tims. “Sure,” one of his boys said, “Can we get you naked?” Everyone at the table started to laugh, except Allen. He was looking at me. I smirked at him. “Do any of you have a realistic order?” Allen laughed and said “Can we get 3 bottles of Cristal?” “Sure, coming right up.” I said. I turned around and heard another one of his friends say “Look at that ass.” I hurried to the bar and got the bottles.

As I returned, I saw Tracy flirting with some guy at the table. “Here you go.” I said handing the bottles to Allen. “Thanks” he said. He looked at me and I started to blush. Tracy evidently saw this and decided to speak up. “Allen Iverson this is Alexandra Jones. But everyone calls her Zan. Zan this is Allen Iverson, which you already no.” she said.

I looked over at Allen and saw one of his friends talking to him. I pulled Tracy’s arm and said “Time for a break.” I pulled her out the VIP section, through the club, and into the back. “How could you do that?” I yelled at her. Tracy looked at me. “I saw him staring at you and you were looking back. I was trying to help you out. Stop being so damn shy.” She said. I turned around and began walking around the back room thinking. She was right, but I would never admit it.

I headed back to the VIP section to finish working. I only had an hour left in my shift and I hoped it would pass as fast as possible.
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:23 am    Post subject: New Story

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD.

WHAT! HE AND TAWANNA AINT TOGETHER IN THIS STORY!! YEAH THIS GONE BE A GOOD ONE!!!
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lilboomer
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:32 am    Post subject: New Story

quote:
Originally posted by iverson's#1:
As I returned, I saw Tracy flirting with some guy at the table. “Here you go.” I said handing the bottles to Allen. “Thanks” he said. He looked at me and I started to blush. Tracy evidently saw this and decided to speak up. “Allen Iverson this is Alexandra Jones. But everyone calls her Zan. Zan this is Allen Iverson, which you already no.” she said.


I AM SO SLOW!!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT TRACY MCGRADY AT FIRST. I WAS LIKE, "WHAT HE GAY". THEN I PAYED MORE ATTENTION TO IT. GREAT STORY THOUGH!!!!!!!
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Mrs.Stoudemire
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:42 am    Post subject: New Story

quote:
Originally posted by lilboomer:
I AM SO SLOW!!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT TRACY MCGRADY AT FIRST. I WAS LIKE, "WHAT HE GAY". THEN I PAYED MORE ATTENTION TO IT. GREAT STORY THOUGH!!!!!!!


girl i was thinkin the same thing hahahaha!!!!
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answer_ai
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Location: the south

PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 5:02 am    Post subject: New Story

IVERSON'S#1 YOUR STORY IS SLAMMIN GIRL,PLEASE KEEP IT COMING! IM FEELIN IT..MUCH PROPS,ANSWER_AI
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 7:44 am    Post subject: New Story

quote:
Originally posted by lilboomer:
I AM SO SLOW!!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT TRACY MCGRADY AT FIRST. I WAS LIKE, "WHAT HE GAY". THEN I PAYED MORE ATTENTION TO IT. GREAT STORY THOUGH!!!!!!!


HAHAHAHAHAHA THAT IS TOO FUNNY!!! YOU ARE CRAZY LMFAO!!!
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iversonluva227
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 5:57 am    Post subject: New Story

THIS STORY IZ OFF DA CHAINZ...KEEP IT GOIN
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sherritaiverson
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Joined: Jan 7, 2004
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 11:39 pm    Post subject: New Story

I JUST GOT A CHANCE TO READ THIS STORY. OKAY, I WAS PISSED OFF WHEN I FINISHED BECAUSE I WAS READY FOR MORE! KEEP IT COMING!! IT'S GOOD!!
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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2004 9:37 pm    Post subject: New Story

Will post next part to story later today
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2004 10:04 pm    Post subject: New Story

quote:
Originally posted by iverson's#1:
Will post next part to story later today


YEA!!!
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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2004 11:51 pm    Post subject: New Story

I headed back to the VIP section to finish working. I only had an hour left in my shift and I hoped it would pass as fast as possible. I headed into the VIP section to finish up work. Tracy McGrady and Allen Iverson had combined tables and my friend Tracy forced me to go check on them. I headed over as slowly as I could, still remembering what had happened earlier.

“Do any of you need anything?” I asked avoiding eye contact with Allen. “Sure, my boy Allen wants your phone number.” Said one of his friends. Allen and I both started blushing and I turned around and began walking away. I headed started to head to another table. Before I could get there I felt someone grab my arm. I turned around and came face to face with Allen.

“Look,” he said, “I’m sorry about my friend. He has a big moth.” “I see that.” I said attempting to walk away. He stopped me and said, “But he was right. I do want your number.” I looked around and my eyes stopped at the clock on the wall. “Sorry,” I said, “I’m off of work now.” I turned and looked back at him. “Come on.” I said to him, motioning for him to follow me.

I led him though the club and with some difficultly into the back room of the club. People pretty much started to mob him when they saw him. When we finally got into the back I saw we were alone. I looked at him, “Why do you want my number?” “Because you’re different.” He simply said. “Don’t make me regret this.” I said. He walked towards me and pulled out his cell. “726-8468.” I said to him. I looked down at his phone and saw he put “Zan” next to it. “Good memory.” I commented. He smiled and kissed my cheek. “You won’t regret this.” He whispered in my ear. I smiled, “Go so I can change and leave.” “Call you tomorrow.” He said walking out. I sighed and headed to my locker to change. “What have I gotten myself into?” I said aloud.

The next day I awoke to the sound of the phone ringing. I looked over at my clock. “Who the hell is calling me at noon on a Saturday?” I thought. I reached and answered the phone. “Hello.” “Hey,” someone said, “you awake yet?” Who is calling me so early?” I said groggily into the pone. “It’s me Allen.” He said.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 4:03 am    Post subject: New Story

THIS STORY IS GOING REALLY WELL..PLEASE CONTINUE..MUCH PROPS..
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 5:55 am    Post subject: New Story

OMG NO YOU DIDNT STOP RIGHT THERE . YOU HAVE TO GOT TO ADD SOME MORE!!!
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StArR77
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 7:02 pm    Post subject: New Story

I'M LOVIN' THE STORY IVERSON#1

KEEP DOIN' YA THANG GIRL
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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 11:18 pm    Post subject: New Story

I bolted up in bed. “You’re kidding me right?” I asked him. “I said I would call you today. So I did.” He said while laughing. “Well, I thought you meant later.” I said. “You doing anything today?” He asked me. I paused and said slowly, “No…why?” “You want to do something with me?” He asked laughing. “Yeah.” I said. “Yeah what?” he asked. “Yeah, I’ll do something with you.” I said. “Great.” He said.

“You want me to meet you at your hotel?” I asked. “You don’t think I can find my way around Atlanta?” he said jokingly. “Okay,” I said, “pick me up then.” “Address.” He said. “121 Marion Avenue, Apt 201B.” I said. “Close to Alpharetta?” he asked. “Yeah.” I said surprised. “I’ll be there at 3.” He said. “See you then, bye.” I said. “Bye.” He said. “Wait,” I said before he hung up, “remember what I said. Don’t make me regret this.” “Trust me,” he said, “you won’t.” I hung and lay back down. “Time to get up.” I said aloud.

I got up and went to the kitchen of my apartment to get something to eat. I had a nice apartment in Alpharetta, which was another reason I took the job at Static. I went and got a bowl of Frosted Flakes and ate. I looked at the clock and saw it was almost 1. I hurried back to my room to get an outfit and to get ready.
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2004 1:47 am    Post subject: New Story

OMG WHY ARE YOU TORTURING US?
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iversonluva227
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 2:45 am    Post subject: New Story

and then...
hehe
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chantel
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 3:06 am    Post subject: New Story

keep it going
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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 11:42 pm    Post subject: New Story

Sorry I haven't been posting. Here isthe next part. More will be on tomorrow. I promise.
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I went to my closest to get something to wear. I wanted it to be nice, sexy, yet warm since it was cold outside. I picked out a pair of tight black jeans with a long sleeved tight black shirt with a red rose on the front. I also decided to wear my Rose Edition Forces I ordered over the Internet.

I went into the bathroom to brush my teeth and shower. I used my Victoria’s Secret pear shower gel so I could smell extra good. I got out, dried off, and lotioned up. I finished getting dressed and looked at the clock. It was 2:15. The only thing I had to do was figure out how to do my hair.

It was exactly 3 when my doorbell rang. I looked in the mirror one last time and hurried to the door. I had decided to put my hair in a ponytail after much debate. I hurried to the door, said a quick prayer, and opened it. Allen was standing there looking to sexy for words. He was wearing a white shirt and blue jeans, with a black leather jacket and white Forces. He also had a black bandanna around his head. “Hey,” he said looking at me, “you look…beautiful.” I blushed and said,” Thanks. Come inside, its cold.” I stepped to the side and he walked in. I closed the door and said, “Find the place okay?” “Yeah, nice place.” He said looking around. “Thanks,” I said, “Ready to go?” “Sure.” He said.

I went to the hall closest and got my leather jacket. He went to the door and opened it for me. I smiled, and locked the door. We headed to the parking lot and he led me to a black Escalade. “Nice.” I commented. “Rented it just for you.” He said grinning, opening the passenger door for me. I laughed as I got inside. “Maybe this won’t be so bad.” I thought.
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 6:47 am    Post subject: New Story

THAT WAS GOOD. I WONDER WHERE THEY GOING. KEEP IT COMING!!
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 7:17 am    Post subject: New Story

I LIKE THE FLOW..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..MUCH PROPS..
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Ivy'sSk8terChik
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 2:11 am    Post subject: New Story

This story is tight! I think that you should come back and write some more soon!
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IversonsOnlyOne
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 1:10 am    Post subject: New Story

this story is good,u should write some more.
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Benjamin
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 11:39 pm    Post subject: New Story

Sorry for not posting in awhile. Here is the next part of the story.
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Allen got into the car and he drove off. “So, what are we doing?” I asked him. “It’s a surprise.” He told me with a mischievous look in his eyes. “Don’t get any ideas.” I told him laughing. He laughed and we started to talk. “So,” he said while driving, “why did you take a job at Static?” “Because,” I said looking at him, “I needed the money.”

“So where are we going?” I asked him. “Somewhere.” He said. “Okay,” I said, “we’re like that now?” “Since you really want to know, we’re going to Sports All-Stars. (Made it up) “Cool.” I said. Sports All-Stars is a big sports amusement park. Anything you wanted to do in sports, it was there. We finally arrived and since it was a Saturday afternoon a lot of people were there. “Are you sure about this?” I asked him. “It’ll be okay,” he said to me, “Just be cool.”

We got out of the car and headed inside. “Where do you want to go first?” Allen asked me. “How about football?” I asked. “Nice choice.” He said. We walked over to the football section. It was outside and was the size of a basketball court, but it was divided in four sections. People were slowly starting to pay me and Allen more attention and he started to see my nervousness. “Know how to throw?” he asked me. “A little.” I said. He threw me the ball and luckily I caught it. He laughed and said “Nice catch.” I smirked and he came to stand behind me. “Here,” he said, “you want me to teach you how to throw?” “Sure.” I said.

At the other in of our section of the football field was a tire for people to throw into. He got behind and lifted my arm up. “Make sure the football is aimed at the tire.” He said to me. But after awhile I couldn’t hear anything. The only thing going through my mind was how close we were. “You got it?” he asked me. “Yeah.” I said quickly. He stepped back and threw the ball. Somehow the ball actually went in. “Nice.” He said. I of course, was still stunned. Allen got another ball and we began playing around. We practiced throwing to each other and before I knew it, we were bumping and tackling each other. I laughed as Allen began tickling me after I tackled him. “Stop.” I said between laughs. “Not until you say,” he said, “Allen Iverson is the finest man on the planet.” I laughed and said “Never.” He started tickling me again and finally relented and said it.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 12:25 am    Post subject: New Story

I LIKE THIS,PLEASE CONTINUE,MUCH PROPS,ANSWER_AI
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iversonluva227
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 3:31 am    Post subject: New Story

propz propz n more propz
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 4:14 am    Post subject: New Story

...and ater that A.I. pulled out his strap,
and start killing everybody.
SIKE..AYE...SHAUTY DIS STORY IS GOOD!..
ITZ AH LIL ON DA GIRLY ROMANTIC SIDE....
BUT ITS STILL INTERESTING....
U GET AH THUMBS UP....KEEP WRITING!!!
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tim
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 4:18 am    Post subject: New Story

OH YEA..I FORGOT 2 ASK...
DO U LOOK LIKE THAT 4 REAL??...
CAUZ IF U DO... AAAAWWWHH GGIIRRLL!!!
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Karamel3A.I.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 4:59 am    Post subject: New Story

GOOD JOB iverson's#1!
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truely_pooh
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2005 7:40 am    Post subject:

I FEEL SO DAMN SLOW! I JUST STARTED READING THE STORY. BUT, I'M FINISHED WITH WHAT YOU HAVE SO FAR. I READ IT IN LIKE 10 MIN.
Very Happy WRITE ON Very Happy
Laughing I LIKES Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 04, 2005 5:59 am    Post subject:

i likes too. Applause Very Happy Wink what ever happened to benjamin?? Eh?
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